Marking notes
Question 1 — Module A
| Band |
Descriptor |
| 17–20 |
Skilfully evaluates how BOTH resonances AND dissonances between the texts shape understanding of the textual conversation; integrated, balanced treatment of the pair; perceptive analysis of context, purpose and form for both composers; sustained personal judgement |
| 13–16 |
Effectively evaluates the relationship between the texts with mostly balanced treatment and sound contextual analysis |
| 9–12 |
Explains connections between the texts; treatment may be unbalanced or sequential; limited evaluation |
| 5–8 |
Describes both texts with limited connection |
| 1–4 |
Attempts to describe one or both texts |
Marker priorities from the clusters: (1) BOTH halves of the dyad — echo and friction — must be argued; scripts that find only harmony (or only critique) miss the question's structure; (2) integration is the perennial discriminator: two sequential single-text essays cap around 12 (flagged every year 2019–2025); (3) 'evaluate … your understanding' requires a personal judgement about what the conversation achieves, not a catalogue of similarities; (4) context must do causal work — why the later composer's moment produces the dissonance — not sit as biographical preamble.
Question 2 — Module B
| Band |
Descriptor |
| 17–20 |
Skilfully evaluates the extent to which the claim matches an informed personal judgement of the text; perceptive analysis of construction (form, style, structure) across the WHOLE text; the say/made relationship explicitly negotiated |
| 13–16 |
Effectively evaluates the claim with sound analysis of the text's distinctive qualities and appropriate whole-text evidence |
| 9–12 |
Explains features of the text with some reference to the statement; limited judgement of extent |
| 5–8 |
Describes the text with limited reference to the question |
| 1–4 |
Attempts to describe the text |
Marker priorities: (1) the statement opposes content and construction — the strongest responses complicate the opposition (what the text 'says' is inseparable from how it is made) rather than simply agreeing; (2) form-specific metalanguage is the named discriminator in six of seven years' feedback: the verse suite treated as a whole, staging and dramatic structure, documentary construction, narrative architecture — not character study; (3) evidence must span the text entire, not two rehearsed passages; (4) a delineated personal and intellectual voice (2023 feedback) — the judgement should be the essay's spine, not its last sentence.
Question 3 — Module C
| Band |
Descriptor |
| 17–20 |
Skilfully crafted writing in the selected form; the stimulus idea functions as the piece's conceptual core; controlled, sustained voice with register and modality matched to audience and purpose; deliberate structural choices |
| 13–16 |
Effectively crafted writing in the selected form; the stimulus is meaningfully integrated; controlled voice |
| 9–12 |
Sound writing with some control; the stimulus is referenced but not developed; form features uneven |
| 5–8 |
Limited control of the form; token use of the stimulus |
| 1–4 |
Attempts to compose |
Marker priorities from the clusters and 2019–2025 feedback: (1) form discipline — 2025's guideline added 'write in the form stated'; discursive means an idea explored from several angles with anecdote, a personal conversational register and an open-ended resolution; persuasive means a controlled public voice, a clear position and rhetorical build; a short story in discursive clothing is penalised; (2) conceptual stimulus use — the unfinished/draft idea should structure the piece (a motif, a governing metaphor, a return), not appear once as quotation; drawing on more than one idea in the stimulus (unfinished ≠ failed; life as draft) separated bands in 2024; (3) clichéd school-set narratives and literal readings are the chief flagged weakness of seven consecutive years.
Practice part (b), if used: quote your own part (a) at least twice; tie each quoted choice to an intended effect on the reader, not to a device name alone (2023 and 2025 feedback); no plot summary, no negative self-critique, no long introduction.